Friday 19 June 2015

kapahaka post

kapahaka Reflection Term 2 2015

Description: Kapahaka is about Maori language and learning new Maori words. It,happen ever Monday at 2.00 clock. Teacher like Rose,Ebony and Nic.

Image:


Big idea:
At kapahaka I enjoy... Doing the puka.

I am most proud of… myself because i did't know about maori words and i know all of the words learning all about maori words.


I find….challenging because... I starter the start of the term so I am slowly Learning the words and the actions too.


I am managing this challenge by…. Learning all the actions to all the songs.


A personal goal for me is… To pronounce the words right all the time.

Our school wide focus this term has been around showing excellence. I show this at kapahaka by... By helping the little kids like year 1,2,3 and maybe year 4. I help the little with the the actions to the songs.

Feedback: this is good you a being really onust.

feedford: next time you could explain more. Jett




Two star's and a wish

first star: I am proud of bring a book bag,Device
andbook for eye time every day. What means that I had to bring it every single day.

Second star: geting straight in to the task and don't
Talk to my friends. Move with purpose and get it done the task done on time with every
Post that I do.

Wish: to get to self Dirceted because It's were it gets challenging. But I want to get to
The self Dirceted wall by term 4.


Thursday 11 June 2015

Maths portfolio

Description: 
In maths we are learning about strategy. We have three sorts of group like Troy a b and c Ebory a b and the last is Elly a b and c.
l'm in Elly b Group.

This is my photo of my maths work.
The questions.


Big idea: I used strategy for doing all the questions.

Feedback/feedford: I think you should make your description a bit longer
And I like how you put both photos on the post. Louis

Evaluation: I think I did good with my big idea and my maths work. But next time I need a longer Description. Next math time I need to work on my knowledge becuase I used strategy for my math work.

Inquiry

Description: my goal is to be scientist. The purpose of doing this post is to learn  a about that scientist doing the animals. We went around all the classics in poutama and we had to pick one scienence Group. I pick Ebory scienence Group cause I like animals.


Criteria:
Think like a scientist
Talk like a scientist 
Make a prediction like a scientist

Feedback/feedford: I like how you have presented your picture/post. But you could say next time which has more venom the tail or the mouth. #MARAKIisSKUXX


Evaluation: I think I did really well on my post but add a little more on my information about my Death STALKERS.

Wednesday 10 June 2015

writing portfolio sample

Description: I am learning about complex sentence. my goal is to learn all about complex sentence. I didn't know any think about complex at the start of the year and now I ever think about complex them.



BIG IDEA: the red is the complex sentence.
their's the video that is got idea from.





Once a upon a time where was a german shepherd puppy  called bobby. Bobby was so so fun to play with. But he was in a very quite store, in the USA. It was like he hiding. bobby was very very fast’s puppy. once’s this guy called Thomas came in the store, and he look at this big big bull dog. Thomas turn around and look a bobby in this little cage.


for something really awesome to happen to bobby Thomas look and look at bobby Thomas was happy but bobby was even happy then Thomas. bobby cried and cried until Thomas would leave the shop. there was all type of animals like white tail spiders and crocodiles. for some reason he was looking at a monkey.



the monkey was called Steve. a long tail and a very red bum. Steve was weird. he like licking his hand all the time. but Steve was very cute licking his hand. the colour of Steve’s d was white. bobby was sad because Thomas buyer Steve. the next day. his man called jack came in the store. jack looked at bobby. bobby looked at jack. jack said this dog called bobby is my now. bobby was jumping around and around. bobby was all happy at jacks million dollar house.          


the end

THE Image of a german shepherd

Tuesday 9 June 2015

Science post

This is that I have been learning at ebony Science Group.

Tuesday 2 June 2015

Reading post

I am learning to make connections
Description: my purpose of this post is to make a connection 
With Messi.
My tic tac toe is: just like me
My big idea is that Messi inspires me to be the best soccer 
player ever
My character is Messi 
Sucses critea:
Comprehension 
text to text
Text to self 
Text to world
Feedback/feedforward:I think that maybe next time you could add more detail to how you two are similar to each other and add more information about who Messi is and what book he comes from.
Olivia.
Evaluation: I can add a little more to my post and the character Messi.