Friday 25 September 2015

Tic tac toe

Description: This is my tic tac toe that I do every school week. A tic tac toe is a thing that you get to pick every week. It is about a person getting bitten by a poisonous spider. WHAT WOULD YOU DO TO HELP HIM.



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BIG IDEA: I had to do 20 Questions Or 10 questions for my post. 20 questions is Expert and 10 is Novice. How many would you do for the post.

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Tuesday 8 September 2015

Portfolio witting post

Description: Rebecca and Suzanne goup have been doing ideas for writing. My goal is I have ideas about what to write. So at the start of the story I have to have a idea what to write about. Rebecca writing goup had to write about a cat and I bird. You had to use juicy words in your writing piece.

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Big idea: My goal for writing is l have a idea what to write about in my story. We had up a story about a bird and the cat. I add a cat to my story so I had two cats and one bird. At the End they live happily ever after. there had to be a problem in story at the end.

Feedford/feedback: you did good because it was very interesting. Next time you could work on your spelling.brennan. 

Evaluation: I think I did good in my writing because I use juicy words and 

Pae Tamariki Reflection Term 3 2015

Description: Pae Tamariki is a thing that we do at school and around the world kapa Hakka performance in front of the school on Pae tamarki day. Pae Tamariki is Maori thing that happen ever year. Kapa hakka is about Maori and same as pae Tamariki it is about Maori. We practice ever Monday 

Big idea: I did good at Pae Tamariki because Kapa Hakka as be practice ever 
Monday and one Saturday. We need to practice maybe more or make it half and hour long at school time

Feedback: I like the way you are proud of Kapa Haka. Shaiv.
Feedford: next time you can said how are you doing I Kapa Haka. Shaiv.